Passionate Passions

Is your character obsessed with something? No? Maybe he/she should be. That’s what I’m starting to think about regarding character development. Are you confused? I’m sorry, let me clarify.

I’m on my third version of the first chapter right now and I think I finally figured out how to make the stupid thing work. Previously I had tried introducing my protagonist and a few interesting characters before starting into the main plot. Here’s the problem: my goal was the plot. Let me say that again so it has a chance to sink in: my goal was the plot.

That may not sound like a problem, but I think I’ve made a realization about writing novels. The beginning isn’t about plot. It’s all about character. I mean, honestly, who cares about dragons, fairies, and explosions if the POV you’re reading is boring.

So what was my solution to said problem? I gave my protagonist a passion. The first chapter is all about basketball, and why not? I love basketball and so I decided to infuse it into my novel. The result is a more strongly written character who has a real relationship with her little sister who previously had no personality other than ditzy. Now, she cares about her older sister and respects how hard she works (aside from being a high school basketball star, she takes care of her sister in a parental way as well since the parents are kind of absent). Is the plot related to basketball? Not at all. In fact, the genre is paranormal romance/urban fantasy, but again, who cares? It’s engaging and develops the characters that I want my readers to care about.

 

Are you tired of all the bold letters yet? šŸ™‚

 

Yours truly,

LatteOnPaper

Woah, It’s Me!

Yep, I’m back! Permanently? Maybe… Here’s the scoop: I just got back from vacation with my family recently. That was fun. I’ve been working on a new project (which took me forever to think up) and it’s going well except for one thing:Ā I CAN’T FIGURE OUT HOW TO END THE DAMN FIRST CHAPTER!!! RAWR! This led me to the idea of blogging about first chapters….well that and a friend of mine started up a blog and I thought to myself, “Oh yeah….that blogging thing…that’s pretty cool” I’ll give the details on where to find her blog at the end of this post. Okay, back on topic.

What makes a good first chapter? Well I can tell you from my reading experiences that there are certain things I expect to get out of a first chapter, things that one might say makesĀ a first chapter GOOD…….perhaps we should look at those…

  1. Character…as in living and breathing. I want to have some sort of reason to give a damn about the people in the pages. I don’t need to know a lot about them, but I certainly should know SOMETHING about them; something that makes me CARE ABOUT THEM.
  2. Hook…as in a small bit of mystery that interests me. I need questions that make me turn pages in order to get answers. Characters are the first step, but it’s not enough to just read about characters that I care about. I care about my brother, but I wouldn’t want to read a book about his daily life, because that wouldn’t be INTERESTING. In other words, the circumstances need to MATTER.
  3. Flow…as in smooth connectivity of words, sentences, and paragraphs. You can have the most interesting character in the world and throw them into the most interesting circumstances ever thought of, but if the writing is choppy and messy, IT MEANS NOTHING. It sounds harsh, but it’s true. Now this isn’t to say that it needs to be complicated. In fact, simpler is usually better; however, it should read clearly and concisely…bonus points if it sounds pretty. šŸ˜‰
  4. Image…as in pictures that fill my head. Remember that we have FIVE SENSES. I don’t want to be limited to seeing worlds; I want to hear them, feel them, smell them, and even taste them. This isĀ perhaps one of the trickiest things to nail, because it shouldn’t hit you over the head. It should be beautifully painted in the background through subtle diction. No one wants to slog through paragraphs of world building filled with EVIL PURPLE PROSE. If you don’t know what purple prose is, you should Google it….and then avoid it…So that’s my list of things to establish in a first chapter….and then continue to utilize through the rest of story hopefully.

    My fun-loving blogger friend who I mentioned earlier is named Britt, and THIS IS HER BLOG THAT YOU SHOULD TOTALLY CHECK OUT!

    Well, that’s all for now. Until next time….wait….where was I going with this sentence….eh oh well.

Long overdue update

Hey everyone. It’s been aĀ  very long time since I wrote a legitimate post and I apologize for that. Part of that is due to a much needed break after nanowrimo, but most of it is probably caused by an inherent laziness that all artists possess šŸ˜€

In the time since I last posted regularly, I’ve been working my part time job at Barnes and Noble, starting some small steps towards revising “Azlara”, my nano project, and fantasizing about a new shiny
project. Other than those things, I’ve been relaxing and enjoying holiday time with my family as I prepare for a spring semester of classes. Keep an eye out for some short works in the future…. hopefully near future šŸ˜›

PreNaNo Jitters

I will be the first to admit that a lot of my anxiousness and jitters are probably caused more often than not, by the large amounts of coffee and espresso that I consume; however, NaNo starts the day after tomorrow and that’s slightly scary. A while back, I started outlining a plot and figuring out some characters, but then I got stuck. Now I’m just hoping that my wonderful pantsing abilities will allow me to move the story forward all month long. In all seriousness, I do feel like I have a pretty solid understanding of my protagonist and I think that it will be enough to tell a 50,000 word story, whether the words come form me or from her. šŸ˜‰

Last Wednesday I went in to Barnes and Noble for a job interview and Iā€™m happy to announce that today I will be attending orientation from one to three in the afternoon. I applied for a cashier position of some sort, but it sounds as though Iā€™ll be working in the cafĆ©. I suppose I wonā€™t really know for sure where theyā€™re placing me until after today, but it should be an interesting experience either way. The last job I held for an extended period of time was my first job and I hated it. It drained me of energy and motivation every day that I worked. Barnes and Noble is a favorite place of mine and I used to go there all the time with my friends, so hopefully this will be a much better experience. Iā€™ve heard great things online from previous employees and I look forward to it.

On the writing side of things, Iā€™m currently sitting at Starbucks writing a little bit in ā€œDefending Ariā€, as well as brainstorming more for my NaNo project, which Iā€™m really excited to start. November canā€™t come fast enough.

Iā€™ll leave things at that and get back to it. Have a good day, everyone!

Barnes and Noble!

Just a Snippet

As the title suggests, today’s blog is just a small tidbit of a post to fill you in on my life so you don’t think I died. I’ve been building up a prologue for my current project, “Defending Ari”. It’s a YA Science Fantasy novel, and along with working little bits on that, I’ve been trying to plot my NaNoWriMo project for November. I don’t want to share any of that right now in case it changes between now and then; also for fear of jinxing myself or something to that degree… šŸ™‚

Catch ya’ll later. I’m going to a writing group tonight and then I’ll catch what I can of the presidential debate tonight.

Plotting?! Woah! What’s That?!

I have to say, I love coming up with these strange and funny titles for my blog posts. Definitely one of my favorite things about posting….anyway, as the title suggests, I’m going to talk to you about plotting today. Iā€™m going to be honest; plotting is not my strong suit. I love the idea of writing something without knowing where youā€™re going. I do that with poems all the time and I try to do it with prose as well. The problem is, when youā€™re working on a larger work such as a novel, this gets to be really hard towards the second quarter of the manuscript.Ā  You start realizing at that point that every time you sit down to write, itā€™s becoming more and more tedious. This kills your motivation.

Thanks to a brilliant horror writer named Dan Wells, I feel that I have the tools necessary to become a plotter. Dan was really struggling with the endings to his stories, and found that he was often re-writing them several times over before he was satisfied at all. When he discovered this secret in a Star Trek Role Playing guide, he realized that it was completely applicable to all kinds of stories, and started using it to help him pen those elusive endings while creating stronger stories at the same time.

Iā€™m hoping to use this seven-point system to keep me on track with my NaNoNovel and if it works well, I might just start using it for most of my projects. Below I will attempt to summarize the elements and the ideas behind them very briefly, for those who donā€™t want to look beyond my blog; but I encourage you to check out either the Writing Excuses podcast, where I first introduced to this, or better yet, look at the you-tube postings of Danā€™s workshop, where he explains this system in a very full manner. Of course you could also do bothā€¦or all three, ratherā€¦. Okay, enough rambling, here it is.

Hook

This is where you first introduce the readers to the main character. It usually shows him/her in a very opposite state from where they are in the Resolution. For example, if they are a strong hero who defeats a powerful villain in the Resolution, they would start out being a very weak person.

Plot Turn I

The first Plot Turn is the ā€œcall to adventureā€. Itā€™s the thing that happens to turn the main characterā€™s world on its head and throw everything off. This is what kicks off the story.

Pinch I

The first Pinch serves the purpose of challenging the main character. They are put into a situation where they must use their skills in order to get out of it. Maybe they fall into a trap. Maybe their friends are incarcerated, leaving them to fight someone by themselves. It could be anything, but it must challenge them.

Midpoint

As Dan points out, this is where the main character goes from reaction to action. Instead of sitting idly by while chaos happens around them, they decide to do something about it. They decide to take matters into their own hands.

Pinch II

The second Pinch is similar to the first one, but the consequences are greater. The second Pinch is more dramatic and holds greater threats.

Plot Turn II

The second Plot Turn is very characteristic of what one would think of as a ā€œturnā€. It actually turns the plot around quite literally. The second Plot Turn is usually the moment in which the main character understands what he needs to do/acquires the tools to do so.

Resolution

This is the actual ā€œdoingā€ part. The Resolution brings about the climax of the story and usually shows the main character in a very opposite state from where he/she was in the beginning.

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This is just a tiny explanation of the system. Below are the links to the Writing Excuses podcast, and the comprehensive 5-part video, in which Dan goes into a full explanation of everything, laden with excellent examples.

I really want to thank Dan Wells for indirectly helping me with this through the inter-webs, and Iā€™d also like to thank Steven Long, Christian Moore, Kenneth Hite, and Owen Seyler for their awesome book that brought Dan into using this system and there-by, introduced me to it šŸ™‚

The Book

Writing Excuses

Dan Wells’ Lecture on You Tube

I Have A New Brother!

Tristan, who is a special needs kid that we’ve been taking care of for quite some time, was officially adopted today! šŸ™‚ We love him a lot, so it was a natural next step, as the only alternative would have been putting him up for adoption to the general public, which we didn’t like the idea of at all.

The adoption hearing was just earlier today and we’ve been celebrating, so not much writing has been going on today; however, tomorrow will be another early wake up and I’ll have many hours to sit down and get some done.

Well, I”m off for more celebration, sorry for the short post

Color Run and NaNo Go Go! :)

Sorry for the absence of posts, guys, been kinda busy. Did the Des Moines, IA 2012 Color Run on Saturday. That was a huge blast! I joggled with my friend, Doug Sayers and got covered in colored powder. Then we juggled at the finish and celebrated in the big mosh of people and had all sorts of fun! I recommend it for sure.

Anyway, in other news, I have decided to officially take part in this year’s NaNoWriMo! Wish me luck! 2,000 words a day is going to be a big challenge for me since I usually write small bursts at a time. I’m starting to brainstorm ideas as of a few days ago, and I’m going to try to get a good outline before I start, which is another challenge for me šŸ˜‰

I will also be getting a short story or two ready soon to start submitting to literary journals, so wish me luck in that as well! Lots of fun things happening soon; I’m excited šŸ™‚

Well, I’m off to juggling club, see y’all later!